Sunday, September 18, 2005

Chronicle of Eric: Poor Jessie

I loved the sugary sounds of scream and suffering. As I was pealing the bloody skin of Jessie with a razor blade her shrieks and cries were only adding to my excitement. I looked at her beautiful face, which was so full of distress and suffering.

I would have enjoyed further but I heard my Dad shouting.

“ Eric! Keep it down!” My Dad barked.

I smiled and looked at Jessie. Dad was such a naïve. He thought I was having fun with Jessie in the basement. I turned down the volume of my stereo system.

Jessie was out of her wits. She was slanting and turning on the ground in a state of blind panic and immense pain.

“Hey Bitch, I am not through with you yet,” I whispered to her.

I opened my toolbox and took out my hammer. I went to Jessie and lifted her up. She moaned in pain and looked at me with tears building in her eyes. I hit her lightly on the head. She winced in pain. I smacked her again, harder this time. She screamed a little but I was not thrilled. I thumped her again, this time using the pointing edge of the hammer. That was an ideal shot and had a perfect landing on her skull. Her head cracked open and a stream of thick red blood flew from her head. She shrieked in hurting and fainted.

I lifted the motion less body of Jessie and placed it gently on the table. As I looked at her gorgeous face, it reminded me of her innocence and sweet nature. I was sadden for a moment but then smiled at the thought of mutilating such a wonderful face. I belted her body to the table. I knew the consequence of acid would be dire and unbearable and I did not want Jessie to make a huge fuss over it. Dad might hear it and I’d get my ass whopped. So when I was sure that Jessie was tightly tied to the table. I went to my beloved toolbox again.

The irony of life, that I found pissing was choices. I looked at the many bottles of acid in the toolbox. Damn! I was unable to decide which acid to select for Jessie’s face and Jessie was regaining consciousness. To make matters worst the alarm on my wristwatch indicated that Dad would call me for dinner in an hour or so.

So I took two different bottles containing the most hazardous acid and went to Jessie. My mere sight made the unfortunate Jessie winced in pain.

“Don’t worry honey. It would hurt badly but I promise the pain wont last forever.”

She looked at me horrified and shocked as I poured both acids on her beloved face. The effect was wonderful. As the room filled with the nauseating smell of burning flesh, the feeble and frail body of Jessie found incredible strength. The whole table shook as she tried to break free. I smiled at her feeble attempts. Poor Jessie, her face was melting I could even see the bones beneath her skin. Her efforts died as she looked at me blankly. Her eyes were full of pain and I could not bear the sight of poor Jessie looking at me. I went for the acid again and pour all the left over in her eyes.

She flinched in throbbing for the last time as the world around her darkened and she finally died.

Damn, now the hard part. I quickly turned on the volume of my sound system. I untied the mutilated and filthy body of Jessie and threw her on the ground. How I hollowed out the grave for Jessie and buried her in the basement is a different story and conceivably a squander of time to be put in words.

So as I finally buried poor Jessie, I heard my dad again.

“ Turn down the volume!!” Dad shouted.

“Ok dad, anything for you” I replied cheerfully. It turned out to be a wonderful day for me.

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I was in my room and was looking good. I just had a nice bath and was planning to start my homework when dad walked in with a bad news. Jessie had disappeared. My dad and me searched for her obsessively. But she was not found and I cried my heart out. I missed her so much. God knows what happened to her!

Well a month later I was in high spirits again as it was my birthday. I just turned fifteen and my Dad bought me a pet as a birthday gift. She was a pleasant and friendly dog. I looked at her cute face wondering what games would I play with her.

In homage to my last pet dog, I named her Jessie…

15 Comments:

Anonymous Pakistani Writers & Writing said...

Sick. but im guessing you find that a compliment.You'd enjoy the book Haunted by Chuckpallahniuck. I didnt.

8:27 AM  
Anonymous Sindhyar (wordsmith) said...

That was Despicable and sick, and I still loved it.

The writing the story all was excellent, I can’t but feel it is ‘inspired’ cause it is so good. Yes many will think its horrendous and that you better write about other nice things, yeah you should but this story was excellent!

Real pleasure!
Keep up the Good work!

8:37 AM  
Blogger Zab said...

waaahhhh yet another fantabulous creation, u like enlightening your fans na. hahah. i have an idea, maybe ud want to write bout it?
a guy falls obesessively in love with a girl, and ends up murdering her bcz he doesnt want the world to see hw beatiful she is?
somethin along those lines. its just an idea.

2:06 PM  
Blogger Mortal said...

okay first of all i would like to tell u that my dog just died today and i think what u wrote is nasty cause i loved my dog..and through out the story i knew u were writing about a dog for some reason well anyways i dont want to comment on that story..im too upset.. :(

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Anonymous sohail said...

Bot alert! shit here comes the pain....


hey mortal don't be sad u're dog is in dog's heaven having a blast with jessie :P.....

opps i am messin... don't relate fiction with facts or it would make me look ultra ugly :P Im already getting alota heat and im not even a bestseller yet... thnks for ure lovely "no comment"

1:57 AM  
Blogger Mortal said...

very funny....remind me to laugh though..well im over my dogs death to be honest i actually wanted it to die so i could get a new one..but i was upset when it died...hmm talk about being mean..now that i think of ure story i do like it..u no what it doesnt even matter if i like it look at the people who read ure beautiful mind blowing (lol) stories and look at the lovely comments u get hahaha apart from mine..well its been a pleasure like always reading ure stuff..Hmm is stuff an appropriate word to use..well already used it so no point of thinking thrice..lol
later
peace

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Anonymous ZAINAB said...

kithay hoh?
gajray gajrey HAHAHA ! :)
loL!

12:56 PM  
Anonymous zainab said...

SORRY, did i get make you wanna kill yourself? :)

12:57 PM  
Blogger Crazed Teacher said...

dang!! that was nasty

8:39 AM  
Anonymous Sohail said...

Now u made darklines truly dark with the "gajrarey" satanic verses from the deepest pits of hell....

plz have mercy!im already gone mad...

2:47 AM  
Blogger Zab said...

youre not mad, youre just a little unwell...get well soon, sweet child of mine...pahaha

3:21 AM  
Blogger Zab said...

ARE U OK
after the equake??

1:16 AM  
Blogger Stray Angel said...

That was sick. Well-written, but sick. Not that I mind.

7:57 PM  

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