Saturday, November 12, 2005

faceless

Help is all I could yelp…
Insecurities bounded by obscurities…
Let me drown, beseech death to be my crown…
No more, this retribution I cannot abide…
Slay me sympathetically the throbbing I can’t hide…
Can I flee the unhappiness this time?
Would they allow me to commit one crime?
Suicide…suffer…bleed…and I cried…

7 Comments:

Blogger Zab said...

With pride is how i stride,
plain pain dominating my brain,
i cannot think without having a strain....
but i must churn my brain
because its true what they say;
no pain, no gain...
suffer, bleed, and cry
but this life wont stop
so why should i make it halt,
or even try?

4:22 AM  
Anonymous Sohail said...

yeh why try is the question that bother me 2 :)

very nice i gta appreciate ure work in ma blog :)

1:50 AM  
Blogger Zab said...

tankooo!
havent seen much of u online!
are you having fun in the uni bus? gagrey gagrey etc...lol!

12:00 PM  
Anonymous sohail said...

yeh so much fun that ive lost most of my hair from yanking them outa their roots :)

and u know what the damn music is still on :(

5:16 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Isn't that just a matter of your choice, i mean really?

And incase you do attempt suicide - don't forget to invite me. I'm a biryani lover.

And oh shit I forgot to mention - it's beautifully written

2:54 AM  
Anonymous Xenab(wordsmith) said...

no can do! there aint no easy way out...u get out of one hell and u enter a worse one...

2:55 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

echoing above 11/2/2005 6:55 PM
yea, I mean JUST DO IT!
go for it! watever the consequences
accept them then. But no one will let you kill (stupid technicalities!)

Gud luck! U r free to choose!

2:56 AM  

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